3BB - Have a look at some of our instructions presentations. Which bits would get us a job on Art Attack, and which would get us kicked off the air?
13 comments:
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I think that Daria should of talked louder and the filmer could of done better filming but i think i done really well with speaking clearly.I need to inprove by learning my words.
13 comments:
I think that Daria should of talked louder and the filmer could of done better filming but i think i done really well with speaking clearly.I need to inprove by learning my words.
the best thing about our presatation was were really clear and good.To improve it we could look at the adenence more and speak loder.
paige and tayla.
Fairisle Junior School
The best thing about my performance was that I was able to remember most of the instructions.
To improve it I would speak louder.
Leanne McDonagh
I think i could improve by speaking louder.The best thing about our presentation was speaking loudly.
Fairisle Junior School
The best thing about performance
was we spoke clearly.
To improveit we could, stop Ryan fiddling with his tee-shirt.
Leon Sherwood
The best thing about my presentation was that it was clear but the worst thing about my presentation when we went wrong and fogot what to say.
The best thing about our persentation was that we used eye contact and imperative verbs.to improve it ,we could to make are voic louder and clearer.
Daria
The best thing about the presentation was our voices because they were loud.
The bad thing was bethany to renember her speech.
bethany, simran and charlie
the best thing about our presentation was they us clear voice. To improve it they could us eye contact.
Yousef
Fairisle Junior School
The best thing about our presentahion was we tryed our best.
To improve it, we could make more eye contact, and make our speach a little bit louder.
Maddi
Jessica
The best thign was how we terckt.
To not do the pictrse.
Fairisle Junior school
The best thing about our presentation was clear so everyone could hear us. To improve it we could look up to talk. Sophie jurd rebecca gardiner
Harrys gruop was looking up and
looking down but speak luoder by bailey
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